For this image I was looking for a classic embrace between a vampire and a human. In keeping with that tradition I researched tons of romance novel covers before coming up with something that is mysterious and seductive.
This is a gorgeous work-- the background & textures are mysterious & beautiful. I think the anatomy of the girl is awkward. Her neck is too long, and she is not arched backwards over his arm. Look at some dance videos or old photographs of the Tango-- there is a certain arch that thrusts the breasts forward-- at once submissive & provocative.
Dance under a shadow moon.. Give in to your desire!.. Dance to the music of your beating heart.. Your soul burns with a fire! Now embrace the darkest night.. Where eternal passion has a chance.. .. If your reborn to undead life.. This may be more then our last dance!.. (sometimes an artwork can inspire me on that moment to create a tribute verse.. because it's that good)